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Friday, April 17, 2020

my friyay work

I want a penguin
Can I please have a penguin, I would do anything. I would run miles the miles
I just really want a penguin please. i really like penguins. they are just so cute .
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3 comments:

  1. Mr TysonApril 17, 2020 at 2:16 PM

    Hi Eli
    That's a very cute penguin! What was the task that your teacher set? What did you have to do? Remember to have an explanation in your blog post. Don't forget to check your writing and add capital letters etc.

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  2. MrsKerinApril 22, 2020 at 11:14 AM

    Hi Eli, I would want this Penguin too! I agree with Mr Tyson- you need to let the reader know what the task was that you were doing. If I was trying to ask for a pet, I think I would mention that I would feed it and clean it, because most parents hate having to do that!

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  3. Ms CattonMay 20, 2020 at 9:52 AM

    Hi Eli
    I love this piece of penguin writing you did. Was it a letter asking for a penguin or a poem? It could be either so remember to tell us when you add a blog. Imagine if we really could bring this cute wee penguin home, although we probably wouldn't know what to do with it when we got it home!

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