hi this is my fairytale it is not finished yet but I'm close to finishing it
Kia ora, I am a student at Marshland School, Welcome - Haere Mai. This is a place where I will be able to share my learning with you. Please note my work may include spelling or other errors because some of it will be my first drafts. I would like to get your feedback - comments, thoughts, questions and ideas to help me Learn Create Share.
Friday, August 21, 2020
2 comments:
To support my learning I ask you to comment as follows:
1. Something positive - Begin with a greeting. Talk about something you like about what I have shared.
2. Thoughtful - A comment that will mean something to me to let me know you read/watched or listened to what I had to say. - use any language.
3. Something helpful - Give me some ideas for next time or ask me a question.
Encourage me to make another post.
Hi my name is Taj from Ahipara school I really liked the way you tried. maybe next time work on more writing.Are you really a pig hunter?
ReplyDeleteHi my name is Matai and I go to Ahipara School.I liked the part when you talked about shooting the pigs.
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